Hell is on the horizon, for
Future finance cannot stand.
We can do it. Getting through it
we return to making barter
freemen, women on the land.
As laid out in Magna Carta —
each a Sovereign Soul and free —
harm no-one and love our Ruler;
Ruled by Self, love thee and me.
Thus the shield of Truth protects us —
firewalk through this hell, prevail.
Behold a new and bright horizon
City of Light beyond the Veil.
Now seeing clear — the Veil is lifted.
We can fly or walk on water,
make our world just as it ought
to co-create and manifest it.
Gone illusion, played our parts;
that fascia, fear had passed in one last night of fright.
Twin moons and sun give constant Light,
Perpetual day as Love so fills our hearts.
12 comments:
new work? great!
I dont get the second verse though.
what is 'it'
the last two lines??
I feel I need it explained, should I?
'It' is the Hell on the horizon, and since I am going out for the day now it would be best if you googled 'freeman on the land'.
been to look quickly ata site, which explains the reference but I still find the poem very hermetic
In a way it was meant to be something to stimulate thought and your own investigation of the terms. I realised they would be new to some, but that is what the internet is about, sharing ideas and information for the good of all. Please stick with it and investigate further. It is an area which is growing and furthering the advance of freedom as those who would control us are losing power.
Once beyond that hell we will see a new horizon of heavenly bliss.
Now you explain I see what you are getting at but I dont think it should be that difficult to work it out; but I am quite literal. I think you may need to put in more within the poem so the clues are decypherable
Yes, I think you are right. I realised something of this when I wrote my last comment. I will look at it again. Perhaps another verse.
Short and crytic and I am too lazy to google! Women on the land? 1940s? Women on the street in Madrid!
Is this a cryticism or a witticism?
Have added some more lines - in yellow. Well I'll be blowed, its turned into Pilgrim's Progress.
Tweaked a bit. Is it getting there?
I understand better what it is getting at. However, I feel uneasy with the 'we' which makes it into propaganda in my opinion.also the capital letter direct me too much to some cryptic (ah ah) references I dont get because I am not initiated. I dont want to sound negative as I know how difficult it is to express what is important. However I feel it requires less tweaking than you might think - maybe trying to read it as an uneducated punter and see how it appears to you. Sorry I can't be more constructive, but I think it is worth working on. The most difficult is to write about what you know intimately and are close to.
Not sure which capital letters you are referring to. There are quite a few. The "we" is speaking of humanity, not a sect, so doesn't qualify for propaganda. This is a vision of life on Earth in the immediate future, 1 – 2 years at most. City of Light is a reference to Bunyan, The Veil is the Veil of Unknowing, Unseeing - ignorance. All will be revealed. Truth will set you free. That sort of thing.
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