Friday, 29 May 2009

A Moment of Ecstasy


A double cone — raspberry ripples.
Tongue spirals the creamy whip, up to its tip.
Lips enclosing fruit, expose sweet juice.
Feel the ice cream take pleasure in giving pleasure.
Fulfilling purpose fully.
Twin scoops sharing — living, loving this moment.

12 comments:

cryptic42 said...

I have been tweaking this for three days. It may not be ready, but I can't hold it back any longer.

ewa said...

It melts in you moouth... well how does it follow so effortlessly the Camden experience?

ewa said...

sorry, mouth

firmament said...

i nearly blushed

ewa said...

I can't believe how cryptic churns (ha ha) out these poems...

cryptic42 said...

Chalk it up to experience. Remember, I have also worked as a Mr Whippy salesman.

Are you wearing the waitress outfit, Annie?

No reaction from Debbie yet...

ewa said...

Sorry, should I leave the room?...

cryptic42 said...

Oh, Ewa, what did you say that you had to remove it?

ewa said...

Nothing topica, I'm afraid... Asked you whether you have been to see the mice recently, as I have written you a rather long reply there; only that the comment got posted after annie's.

cryptic42 said...

I have attempted to whip it into shape. Any further comments on the slimmer version?

ewa said...

This is much more successful David, much better. I think it works very well.

cryptic42 said...

Amazing. Hasn't melted yet.

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