Friday, 15 May 2009

Limerick for David


There was a webmaster from Dulwich
whose mission in life was to publish
his words and his verse
for better and worse
forgetting to cook food that would nourish.

8 comments:

cryptic42 said...

Is the worse part the limericks? This brings you into the food discussion Ewa and I were having here. But I am still lingering on the steps...

Debralondon said...

I couldnt possibly comment! So what was the food discussion?

cryptic42 said...

See "Have we met?"

cryptic42 said...

Would 'forgetting to eat, which would nourish' scan better?

ewa said...

David, I do think correcting limericks is not a good idea... Just enjoy them. Ps did you like mine?

cryptic42 said...

'Twas but a question, not an imperative. It actually depends on how you read it. As to liking yours, this is not the place to say...

Debralondon said...

I am with Ewa on that! I like my version thank you very much. So what's with the squiggle? The writer formerly known as David has become a squiggle!

cryptic42 said...

You see, this is why I am loath to comment in the Crypt, I am so wary of offending. Now you retaliate with squiggles and no doubt behind a hand, giggles. What squiggles? I see no squiggles. ~~~

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